Quiet flame,
mountain azalea,
all the little bones
of your fingers fan dear,
unhooking pale crinoline butterflies
hammocked under
old growth
here.
Crank down that window
as you breeze through the forest
and inhale the luxury
of the least expected.
From behind plumes of lace,
the egrets which edge your face,
from the swamp of the car,
the smudge pots of then.
Now breathe in skeins
of canopied light,
your heart a phoenix,
a brass cornet,
triumphant,
singing high.
Even the waxwings
know who you are.
so elemental, she is like a part of day, or earth itself, or time - that which holds the day to the earth, like dawn. somehow pink. could it be residue of the rose? or is it the lace? with the power to breathe life anew.
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erin
This is in honor of the birthday of a dear MySpace (& now, Facebook) friend of mine who has been such a loyal reader and who leaves such elegant, deep-felt comments.
ReplyDeleteI realized after I posted this that I had some inspiration come from "a little journey", erin. I think this is an invitation to come out of the tin box.
She must be something, to inspire this, MJ. It is lusciously beautiful. Every line comes to me as erin gorgeously said. To say what I love about it would be to rewrite each line out, which I would not mind doing, and see how it feels to have these words come from my fingers.
ReplyDeletepale crinoline butterflies / hammocked under old growth . . !!
When I get to "egrets" all is perfection, large and small. the smudge pots of then . .
Oh dear, I am doing what I said I couldn't do, which is to find anything about this poem I don't adore.