Poetry and Such
have you ever launched a small boat from shore? have you ever stood ankle deep in shallow water to do this? this poem feels like this. but i have to tell you, i didn't even need the poem. the title was enough. imagine that, giving us the title only and asking us to tell YOU what your poem is.xoerin
whew...this is hot...few words but powerful effect...and love how you go from the dreamy, tender start to...well..smiles
Sorry I missed this, really I am. (Have gotten a bit buried.) Love the play on words of clothes ... lines. And the way two become one, the self and the other co-mingled.
Love this, it's so delicate and playful and lovely.