tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post4994398235813226510..comments2023-06-17T04:09:19.944-05:00Comments on Bird in a Box: my little girlMiss Janehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13659603837343456631noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-46368947192426003402011-06-30T03:42:51.059-05:002011-06-30T03:42:51.059-05:00The rhythm and refrain is perfect. The revelation ...The rhythm and refrain is perfect. The revelation at the end brilliant. Deceptively simple, and beautiful, write, Miss Jane.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-55157167918368392662011-06-28T20:44:49.287-05:002011-06-28T20:44:49.287-05:00oh lord, you've just broken my heart with perf...oh lord, you've just broken my heart with perfection. slam bam damn perfection.<br /><br />xo<br />erinerinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16636371927224076866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-42756999607641786192011-06-28T10:13:25.694-05:002011-06-28T10:13:25.694-05:00i loved this - it has such a surreal and warm but ...i loved this - it has such a surreal and warm but also a timeless feeling..great closure as wellClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-12716795488865355782011-06-27T21:02:34.100-05:002011-06-27T21:02:34.100-05:00i love the voice here, Janette. the way you'v...i love the voice here, Janette. the way you've captured each scene and set them down sticky cornered like photographs in an album; creased, the colours slightly faded, no longer accurate, but because of that, somehow more true.<br /><br />then, with that perfect final line, put it in a drawer in the dresser, and softly slid it shut.bruce dorlovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01006724431838559504noreply@blogger.com