tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post3418516316876615652..comments2023-06-17T04:09:19.944-05:00Comments on Bird in a Box: Far From ItMiss Janehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13659603837343456631noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-24993956457041165162012-01-13T15:59:55.497-06:002012-01-13T15:59:55.497-06:00Just stunning, so many of these pieces that I have...Just stunning, so many of these pieces that I have never read, that I didn't know about til now. Thank you, and thanks to the others for describing so well what you do so exquisitely.mthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10061318054005343250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-37925658823957389022012-01-10T17:51:22.143-06:002012-01-10T17:51:22.143-06:00ah I love "I measure time in bowls
of tea,&qu...ah I love "I measure time in bowls<br />of tea," - how brilliantly put! and original - enjoyed this lots, cheers !Ostensible Truthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08775793995809226782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-78643358600288373202012-01-04T08:04:48.160-06:002012-01-04T08:04:48.160-06:00brendan and ruth have responded perfectly.
i fi...brendan and ruth have responded perfectly. <br /><br />i find the naming of Grandmother as strong and definitive. only doing this, writing <i>Grandmother</i> gives character and place to the narrator. this is very interesting to me.<br /><br />LOVE the last stanza. love it. this narrator is defiant in the face of sorrow, privately so, but none the less. <br /><br />xo<br />erinerinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16636371927224076866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-63068955549118354642011-12-27T13:12:43.352-06:002011-12-27T13:12:43.352-06:00Getting the grief that far out into a fairy tale I...Getting the grief that far out into a fairy tale I think wraps the thorns up enough. The third stanza lets us know that there's hope enough to still dare. - BrendanBrendanhttp://blueoran.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-21077393136614279012011-12-23T09:34:30.726-06:002011-12-23T09:34:30.726-06:00Thank you, dear Ruth.Thank you, dear Ruth.Miss Janehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13659603837343456631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-6849858096676694192011-12-23T05:18:48.559-06:002011-12-23T05:18:48.559-06:00This imagery is just exquisite, MJ, even if sorrow...This imagery is just exquisite, MJ, even if sorrowful, the language so lovely. I hope you will have a beautiful Christmas weekend.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.com