tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post2571609621095613853..comments2023-06-17T04:09:19.944-05:00Comments on Bird in a Box: Flame in SnowMiss Janehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13659603837343456631noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-5643221881410184172011-11-14T04:49:21.475-06:002011-11-14T04:49:21.475-06:00She must be something, to inspire this, MJ. It is ...She must be something, to inspire this, MJ. It is lusciously beautiful. Every line comes to me as erin gorgeously said. To say what I love about it would be to rewrite each line out, which I would not mind doing, and see how it feels to have these words come from my fingers.<br /><br /><i>pale crinoline butterflies / hammocked under old growth . . </i> !!<br /><br />When I get to "egrets" all is perfection, large and small. <i>the smudge pots of then . . </i><br /><br />Oh dear, I am doing what I said I couldn't do, which is to find anything about this poem I don't adore.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-91136163625913566512011-11-13T23:04:16.000-06:002011-11-13T23:04:16.000-06:00This is in honor of the birthday of a dear MySpace...This is in honor of the birthday of a dear MySpace (& now, Facebook) friend of mine who has been such a loyal reader and who leaves such elegant, deep-felt comments.<br />I realized after I posted this that I had some inspiration come from "a little journey", erin. I think this is an invitation to come out of the tin box.Miss Janehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13659603837343456631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-880716367641540716.post-69703896408374650712011-11-13T22:14:03.245-06:002011-11-13T22:14:03.245-06:00so elemental, she is like a part of day, or earth ...so elemental, she is like a part of day, or earth itself, or time - that which holds the day to the earth, like dawn. somehow pink. could it be residue of the rose? or is it the lace? with the power to breathe life anew.<br /><br />xo<br />erinerinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16636371927224076866noreply@blogger.com